| Once upon a time there were 3 little seals. The 1st seal was fat,lazy but the other seals didn't no he was smart and his name was jack. 2nd seal was fit and always hunger and his name is nemo. 3rd seal was fast but dumb and was always angry and is name was fork. one day the 3 little seals were kicked out from there cave because the done to much pranks so the 3 little seals built there own house. A shark was wondering around and the shark saw the 3 little seals building a house. The 3 little seals had a competition who could build the best house. So the 3 little seals split up to find different stuff for them to build. jack found seaweed so he built the house out of seaweed. So the shark came and knocked on the door and said can i please come in jack said “how is it” and the shark said “i am Jim “ no not by the hair of my slimy chin chin. Fine then i will go away. But did he..... in a flash he turns around and is charging at jacks house. So the jack ran to the nemos house and a hide and said to him “nemo there is a crazy hunger shark on the lose. bang goes the house and the seaweed goes to shore .So jack,nemo seals have salt water coffee about 1 hour later the shark finds the 2nd seals house with 1st seal in it so the shark gets his fork a steak knife and caot hanger to break to pick the lock.So while first seal and 2nd seal were having a salt water coffee the shark is getting ready to charge 1 2 3 and the shark is going for the attack and the nemo says “did you hear something brother” nop.then bang the jack and nemo go flying out and the shark to 3 rd seals house he found the titanic. then 3rd seal called coast guard to kill the shark and they did then they had a shark steak yummy THE END. |
Monday, November 28, 2011
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